they light up my heart with a spark
its so dark, its so lonely says my heart
i hope there comes a light
i hope to see the light
i feel like reaching up the space
to eat the sun for its light and grace
then i will ask my heart, "is that enough for you dear?"
for its clear
that no light can light up my heart but you
but i cant find you as i have no clue
past gives a beacon to future
about the oncoming torture
of the life i have spent
and what all will i repent
but not to worry, my heart says
for there are many meadows to graze
i believe my time will come
yes it will come
for i believe in believing my heart
for i have become smart
to smell the fragrance in the air
which reminds me of you there
there are faces in the dark
they light up my heart with a spark
its so dark, its so lonely says my heart
then there comes a light
there comes the light
3 comments:
The feelings are good, but you need to work on your poetry. Try Free Verse because its the feeling that is important and not just the rhyme. :) Nice effort though...
hmmm ... but i only like poems with rhymes ... may be it really calls out tha kid in me
:P
Then try smaller and simpler words first... Dont try to juggle depth and rhyme :)
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